Revision 2 - Titling and Text on Screen

In the midterm submission, we had our credits in the same spots every time they were on screen. How we revised this is by putting them in different places and changing the sequencing of names. This makes the scene's opening seem a little more natural. We also changed the titling of the film. In the midterm submission, we had the film play after the gunshot and the music would return. This made our film seem more like a trailer to the film, so we moved the title to the beginning credits as the scene's ending is now a cut to black after the gunshot and started bird noises were added. The ending now looks more like a movie as it would continue to the next scene. Another small revision we made was with the font. We notice that the first and last letters were being cut off, so we added spaces to the beginning and end of each name and the issue was fixed.

The videos below are the revision made: